deadly predators plan

hi my plan was to put in the animal from our journal i put in deadly predators because that’s what i read for this week.

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  1. Hi Te Hari, I liked your plan, it was really good, great job. Just giving some feedback, (Thought for 5 minutes straight)..Next time just use Punctuation, Because sometimes I got confused while reading that, uhm..yea add punctuation in your description too. Bye bye!

    -AnDrEa

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