WALT: use our knowledge of narratives to create our own story. Noah the glorious detection dog. Noah is a detection dog who lives in Aussie.Noah has black and white fur and is an encouraging dog.Noah is a very spectacular and a life saver.Noah tries to find a person that needs help but finds an injured animal and barks they were caught in a wildfire and wild fires normally happen in the forest it was dry and destroyed but now it is burning and hot he barks to signal that there is an injured animal and someone hears a bark.That person was Noah’s owner he goes to the barking and finds out an animal is hurt he pushes the tree with the help of some friends.They carry the animal to safety.Noah finds a person this time and he needs desperate help and barks as if he roars they came again.
Hi my name is TeHari and this was what i had to do for writing i only got up to here since i was not here for 3 days but i still got a lot done.The story’s main character is named Noah he is a detection dog who lives in Aussie he has an owner but i dont know what his name was so i just called him owner he has friends that help him on his journey.
Hi, I understand that you have been away, but I think you did a great job at describing Noah, but next time I think instead of calling it Noah all the time maybe for some sentences you could switch to things like ‘he’ ‘they’ them’ and setra. But overall I think it was a good piece of writing sense you’ve been away :).